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WORTH A CHANCE
When I planted Iceland poppies
in the clay
of the new section
exposed to the autumn winds
it seemed unlikely
they’d survive
but they have.
Now another calyx
is burst by petals
which
if left
will quickly fall
but if gathered will be replaced
by others.
And if the stems are burnt
the blooms will last
a little longer
in time, new commitments
involvements, but at present
a flourish of colour.
Harvey McQueen
A the launch of my anthology of favourite New Zealand poems on Suinday Fiona Kidman chose this early poem of mine to read – it is not in the collection I hasten to add. I only chose one of mine,in the dedication to Anne my wife.
What Fiona did not realise is that it was one of the earliest poems I ever gave to Anne. It arouses memories in both of us. The only problem is that Anne swears that the original I gave her had in the last line ‘a flourish of orange’. .From this vantage I cannot adjudicate. What Fiona read is what is printed in my first collection of poems. All I can say ‘is good choice Fiona’. And thanks
Apricot season
4 years ago
Ah, I like ... and whether "orange" or "colour"--it works! Thank you.
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